WALT: Use punctuation correctly and writ in first person.
One sunny day I was at QEii in my blue togs. I jumped into the pool it was cold like ice. Me and my brother were playing catch with my ball and when ever the ball dropped it makes a big splash. Then when we got out of our togs we went to the shop and had vanilla ice cream. Then we had a hot shower once we got home.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Gabriel I like how you said that you were in your blue togs.Next time you can maybe you can do a little bit more writing.
ReplyDeletegood job
thanks Izzy